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Friday, 25 April 2025
If you liked The Secret History, you’ll love these five dark, literary campus novels
It’s a story steeped in atmosphere, with characters who linger in your mind and a setting that feels like it exists outside of time. If you’re looking for books matching that experience, I’ve rounded up five novels that channel similar dark academia energy, moral complexity, and obsession-fuelled tension.
Sunday, 20 April 2025
How to write your novel in three drafts: the method that keeps you moving forward
Writing a novel can feel overwhelming, especially when you’re trying to perfect every page as you go. But what if you didn’t have to get it right the first time? What if, instead, you focused on getting it down, shaping it later, and only polishing once the story is in place?
That’s the power of the three-draft method — an approach popularised by Matt Bell in his excellent craft book Refuse to Be Done: How to Write and Rewrite a Novel in Three Drafts. At its heart, this method gives writers structure, clarity and, perhaps most importantly, permission to keep going when things feel messy.
Here's how it works:
Wednesday, 16 April 2025
The writing struggle is real: how to beat procrastination and get the words down
Revising this latest book has been tough – and that’s with an outline. The story is there, the chapters mapped out, but the act of sitting down and actually doing it? That’s the hard part.
I’ve always found that writing doesn’t get easier just because you know what comes next.
Monday, 7 April 2025
When to break the rules of writing: how and why to Experiment
There’s a point in every writer’s journey when you realise the rules, the ones you've been diligently following, are not commandments but conventions. They're guidelines. Or handrails. Ideas that work brilliantly until they don’t. And sometimes, the best writing happens when you break them.
This isn’t a green light for chaos. You have to know the rules before you break them. You have to understand how rhythm works before you fragment a sentence. You need to learn what a story arc is before you bend it, or break it. But once you do, experimentation can lead to extraordinary storytelling.
So when should you consider breaking the rules? And how can you do it well? Luckily there are loads of great examples.
Tuesday, 1 April 2025
Joan Didion and the art of emotional precision: What writers can learn from her style
Joan Didion never wasted a word. Her prose was as spare as it was surgical. It was a style that she forged as a journalist and later honed in her essays and fiction that cut to the heart of American life. For writers and readers alike, there's so much to learn from her technique, especially in a cultural moment saturated with overstatement and noise. If there was one takeaway from Didion’s writing, it’s that less is more.
The incredible shrinking novel: why short fiction is having a big moment
From Claire Keegan's Small Things Like These to Samantha Harvey's Orbital, these compact works of fiction pack a punch around 200 pages. No filler. No indulgent middle act. Just distilled intensity, executed with precision.
Saturday, 22 March 2025
The 'by zombies' test: how to spot (and fix) passive voice in your writing
Ever feel like some of your sentences were written by zombies? If your writing sounds a bit lifeless or unclear, you might be falling into the passive voice trap. This post explores a fun trick called the 'by zombies' test – a simple way to spot passive voice – and explains why switching to active voice can bring your prose back to life. That’s why it matters so much in fiction and journalism, and why so many writers have something to say about it.
Tuesday, 18 March 2025
The second draft survival guide: 10 tips on editing your novel
But the journey to a polished manuscript has only just begun. Now comes the editing and your next two to three drafts.
According to Deborah Levy, author of Hot Milk and The Cost of Living: "Editing is the most wonderful part of writing. It begins to roar in the edit." Embracing the editing process is crucial to transforming your initial draft into a compelling narrative that will grab the attention of literary agents and book editors.
These ten tips are ones I’ve always found helpful after that crucial first draft is done.
Thursday, 13 March 2025
AI’s growing ability to write creatively like us
AI is no longer just generating dry, robotic text. It’s now writing compelling fiction. OpenAI’s latest model has demonstrated an ability to craft stories with depth, emotion, and narrative structure that rivals human creativity. CEO Sam Altman recently shared a short story generated by AI that was not just coherent but hauntingly resonant, sparking a wave of discussion about what this means for the future of literature.
Jeanette Winterson, a long-time advocate for technological innovation in storytelling, believes this shift is not something to fear but to embrace. She describes AI as “alternative intelligence”, suggesting that its ability to be other might be precisely what human writers need—pushing creative boundaries, offering new perspectives, and reimagining storytelling.
Wednesday, 12 March 2025
The art of the campus novel – what makes them work, and which are the best?
Writing about Donna Tartt last week and The Secret History got me thinking about the campus novel.
I’ve always been fascinated by this sub-literary genre, from what makes it work to why it continues to captivate readers and how it manages to be both intensely specific and universally resonant.
The best campus novels transport us to a world of intellectual ambition, youthful recklessness, and, often, profound disillusionment. They capture a moment in life where identity, relationships, and ambition collide.
But what exactly makes a great campus novel, and which books best define the ever-growing genre?
Sunday, 9 March 2025
Crafting the perfect opening lines of a novel
Do you need a killer opening line for your novel? Or is there an alternative way to draw readers in right from the start?
I'm slightly obsessed by the opening lines of novels, and for me, the opening line isn’t merely about crafting a flashy hook; it’s about setting the tone, sparking curiosity, and providing readers with a reason to keep turning the pages. A brilliant first sentence generates intrigue and anticipation, drawing the audience into your story before they even realise it.
Thursday, 6 March 2025
A guide to reading Joan Didion
Joan Didion's writing is a masterclass in precision and insight. Her distinctive style, marked by pared-down, rigorous prose, captured the nuances of American life and personal introspection. As a leading figure in the New Journalism movement of the 1960s, Didion's work blended literary flair with journalistic integrity, offering readers a profound lens through which to view the world.
Tuesday, 4 March 2025
Whatever happened to Donna Tartt?
I found a box of books in the attic yesterday, and a signed copy of Donna Tartt’s The Goldfinch was buried there. I added it to the bookshelf alongside a signed copy of The Little Friend.
I’m a massive fan of Donna Tartt, particularly (like many people) The Secret History, which I wrote about recently. It got me thinking—whatever happened to Donna Tartt?
It has been more than a decade since Tartt published her last novel, The Goldfinch (2013), which won the Pulitzer Prize and cemented her status as one of the most celebrated literary figures of our time. But since then? Silence.
Tartt has never been a prolific writer. She famously takes a decade (or more) between books, crafting intricate, deeply atmospheric novels that become instant modern classics. The Secret History (1992) and The Little Friend (2002) were each published with long gaps in between, setting a pattern of meticulous, slow-burn literary output. But now, more than ten years have passed since The Goldfinch, and there’s no official word on what comes next.
So, where is Donna Tartt? And why is the wait for her next novel taking even longer this time?
Monday, 3 March 2025
How to find your narrative voice: from first person to omniscient
Finding your narrative voice is one of the most important, and often most challenging, aspects of writing fiction.
It’s what makes your storytelling unique, setting the tone for your novel and shaping how readers connect with your characters.
However, voice is often confused with point of view (POV), the narrative perspective from which you choose to tell your story. First-person, third-person limited, or omniscient each has its strengths and challenges.
I have tried two approaches. First-person for modern fiction (both my published novels) and third-person limited for my long-paused historical novel. I am more comfortable telling a contemporary story with the former, although that style did not feel appropriate for a historical novel.
So, how do you choose the right one? And how do you develop a distinct voice within it? Let’s break it down.
Wednesday, 26 February 2025
How to write a novel when you have no time
One of the biggest challenges for most writers is finding the time. In my 20s and early 30s, I could sit for hours and devote entire weekends to writing without distractions. But life changes. Responsibilities pile up, free time disappears, and you have to adapt.
For a while, I thought I needed long, uninterrupted stretches before I could write. Otherwise, what was the point? I told myself that anything less than 90 minutes was pointless—but in reality, I was just putting blockers in the way.
I’ve since learned that writing a novel doesn’t require marathon sessions. It can be done in snatches, even 20 minutes here, a paragraph or two there.
If you feel like you don’t have time to write, you’re not alone. But that doesn’t mean you can’t finish a book. I’ve spent ages thinking about this and collected some strategies and wisdom from authors on how to write a novel when your schedule is packed.
Tuesday, 25 February 2025
Curtis Sittenfeld on Writing: Openness, routine, and authentic storytelling
I'm a huge fan of Curtis Sittenfeld, and Prep and Rodham are favourites. Her writing is always sharply observed and full of depth and memorable characters. In a recent story from The Guardian, she explores her writing process and shares how openness and authenticity influence her best-selling novels.
Monday, 24 February 2025
Publication of Joan Didion’s journal creates an ethical literary dilemma
Joan Didion has been a monumental influence on countless writers, including myself. Her works, from Slouching Towards Bethlehem to The Year of Magical Thinking, have profoundly shaped modern literature.
Anything new by her is a major literary event. So, the recent announcement of the posthumous publication of her personal journal, Notes to John, has ignited a significant ethical debate within the literary world.
Yes, it is exciting to see Didion's unpublished work, but is it right to publish her personal journals? Especially those detailing conversations with her psychiatrist?
Friday, 21 February 2025
There are no New plots: And that’s a good thing
As writers, we often hear the dreaded phrase: "Every story has already been told." It’s the kind of thought that can stop creativity in its tracks.
However, Lee Child, the author of the Jack Reacher series (29 books and counting), sees it differently. He argues that originality doesn’t come from plot. It comes from execution.
This isn’t a problem. It’s a liberation.
Thursday, 20 February 2025
Six novels that demonstrate why “show, don’t tell” is worth getting right
When I wrote about “The art of showing, not telling” recently, I realised how many great examples of this technique exist in literature. Some authors take it to the next level, showing us emotions, relationships, and tension in ways that draw entirely us into the story without a single line of “telling.” I thought it might be useful to look at a few of these standout examples and the writers who have mastered the art of showing so well that their stories linger long after you’ve finished reading.
Monday, 17 February 2025
How to nail the crucial first five pages of your novel
I recently wrote about books that can help with style and craft when writing your novel, and now I want to look at those crucial first five pages.






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